Monday 17 May 2010

Crit Feedback

The crit addressed some small issues with my designs that needed altering. They mainly concerened my think bike leaflet. With slight alterations needed to the dividing lines so they were all the same width, the use of the yellow lines and the confusion of the Think Bike text and the "mirror. signal. manoeuvre." strapline. I've taken on the advice and adjusted and improved the design according to the advice.

What was brought up in the crit was mentioning that i expand the co-op brief to in store signage and price ticket, which i had already produced the work for and it was on my blog.


The big issue was with the production of the key ring and air freshener which both should have been on thicker stock.

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